Colin Day
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The author, in his synopsis of himself, talks about his culinary & retail experience - well yes he seems to be "cooking the books" as €4 to €6 for a miserable number of pages is certainly not value for money. That's quite apart from the content of the book which is nothing to write home about. Will I buy more from this author - a simple flat NO will suffice !!!
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Peter Petermann
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Tech: nonsense Character Development: non existent World building: nope. Storytelling: what story? The "book" at most is an outline of an idea. Writing: the author manages to switch between past and present, tells instead of showing, and at times just lazily writes things like "" rather than having the character act out. This is the worst "book" in the last 100 I've read.
Carmi Starwalt
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Intresting concept, too bad Paul couldn't be bothered to flesh out the title character enough for us to care about what happens next. Could have been a great novel... This is what comes of cranking out 50+ "titles" in two years, no time for quality story telling.