Take Me (FREE): The Untouchables #1

The Untouchables Book 1 · Grey Ink Press, LLC
4.4
186 reviews
Ebook
374
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About this ebook

HE CAN'T KEEP HIS HANDS OFF HER... 

BUT HE CAN'T HAVE HER... 

When controlling royal vampire Dominic Blackmoore mistakes the wedding planner as his mate, Dom gets sucked into an erotic ride with a curvy woman he can't resist. As the head of the Blackmoore household, Dom needs a suitable mate—a mate with money, power, and clout—and a wedding planner just won't do the trick. Even if she brings his body to life in ways he's never felt before. The connection


Felicity and Dom feel for one another trumps all political propaganda. And when one terrible and irreparable lie seals both of their fates, everything they've worked for is threatened. Now, they're both in the race of their lives, and the wedding is off.


Buy Take Me and see why nearly one million readers have chosen T. A. Grey's romances!

Ratings and reviews

4.4
186 reviews
Mark Vann
February 22, 2017
I appreciate that it is free, and that it has a good length to it. I would rather read less pages to get to the point. Good vivid detailing is one thing, but a lot of this consists of drawn out thoughts from the character's perspective, and then lacks essential detailing in critical areas...with horrible grammar. Some sentences are badly constructed. ("Had to was built" is a horrible way to say "should have been built" or "must have been built" when referring to the desk in Dominic's main office that was apparently too large to move in from the hall... The night Felicity received the phone call to meet with him at midnight after she was officially hired as the event planner and he paid her phone bill) After skimming over the first 200 pages the book got more interesting. I wasn't too crazy about the intimate scenes either. Just not what I would describe as "Hot!" ..but rather it seemed as if I were reading the same thing over and over with rambling, and dull interaction that was drawn out with unnecessary words, words that sometimes had no place in the sentences. As well as some sentences missing words such as 'to' or 'the'. I would have rated less had I paid for this. Hopefully if I ever read from this author again it will redeem her, and sway my opinion. I could only hope that the next one doesn't seem as though the author is falling asleep during writing the story.. Or lacks to make the effort to proofread afterwards. I do admit I enjoyed the story line, which is why I did finish the book. I hope my honest opinions help. Keep up the hard work. This is better than a lot that I have read for free
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Alba B
June 13, 2023
Lengthy descriptions that do not add value to the story, bad editing, so many typos!😕 They were a distraction to the story, but the story was so sexy, spicy, and I finished it quickly.😉
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Margie Parker
October 28, 2015
This is definitely a book that you need to have the day off to read because you won't get any sleep if you leave it for bedtime, I didn't. It's been a long time since a book has made me feel so many different emotions. You just get sucked into the story a must for your library.
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About the author

USA TODAY Bestselling Author T. A. Grey lives in Missouri where she lets her imagination explore uncharted worlds, probabilities, and creatures that don’t really exist. With a passion for books, especially ones with feisty women and an occasionally heroic man of action, T.A. writes erotic romance novels that test her limits of creativity.

When she’s not writing, she’s thinking about writing, and planning her next book. On the side, she enjoys watching horror movies and stand-up comedians. She is married with five cats, but she’s not married to the cats. - See more at: www.tagrey.com. 

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