Drew B (Rain4120)
this is only my opinion nothing more nothing less. the story started off great but as it continued on, for me, it just went downhill and didn't go with direction I thought it was going. I also personally don't like the Prince's personality. but as I said this is just my opinion for anyone who reads this comment you have to read the story yourself.
5 people found this review helpful
Carmen Mariano
The story plot was cute, a bit dull at parts but the characters were charming. If your looking for revenge or any type of overcoming, and slapping people in the face then this one is not for you. Over all it was an enjoyable read to kill time.
Du Weldenvarden
Great! the story progressed at just the right pace, and even made callbacks to earlier events to make the story feel lived. the story didnt always follow a strict progression of time, and yet for this story it worked perfectly and never felt jumbled. although my only critical comment would have been to spread the narrative more for the school life, to build intrigue and mystery, as this is the backbone of the plot.