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Niña van Ofwegen
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Sorry, ik heb hem niet uit kunnen lezen. Hij is erg slecht geschreven met heel veel fouten, zowel in spelling en grammatica als verhaallijn en karakters. Ik irriteerde mij kapot aan een deurmat van een verpleegkundige, die in paniek raakt bij een paar schrammetje en een overdreven narcistische rijke man, die het ene moment overdreven zelfverzekerd is en het volgende moment zich gedraagt als een onzeker klein kind. Dus nee sorry, ik kan hem je niet aanraden.
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Heta
Couldn't finish this book. The book has a good story line and great potential, but it needs some serious editing and fixing up of the male lead. If it was a few errors here and there, it would be fine, but it's like no one has read over the book before publishing. I absolutely love reading, and hate not finishing a book, but this was a book I just couldn't complete. My main issue with the book is how the male lead acts like a baby. I can't get over the fact that he acts like a child.
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Nancy Maitland
I wish it didn't feel like it was skipping important parts of the story ust was moving to fast and like it was giving a book report , He was poor little rich boy just breezing through women and spending money and couldn't face life. After sex she tells him she is pregnant he gets up goes to the bathroom and locks the door not saying a word. Also you had to go back and reread sentences to make sense of it because words were missing or using the wrong ones. Could have been better.
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