Seeking the Sheriff

Calle J. Brookes

May 2017 · Masterson County Book 1 · Lost River Lit Publishing, L.L.C.

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Trouble. She doesn't need his kind of trouble... 

The sheriff of Masterson County has always meant trouble--especially for the Tylers of Tyler Township. 

The last thing Phoebe Tyler needs is the sheriff complicating her life. 

She has to focus on helping her widowed father run their struggling ranch and raise her younger brothers. When the sheriff shows up with her teenage brother, Phoebe knows more problems are right behind him. 

He has a job to do... 

Sheriff Joel Masterson has an entire county depending on him to keep them safe. 

He doesn't need more trouble with the rabble-rousing Tylers. But once he gets a good look at the eldest Tyler daughter, things get complicated. Real complicated--real quick. 

Now Joel doesn't mind trouble--at least...not Phoebe's kind. 

Trouble has a way of finding all the Tylers sooner or later... Phoebe is no exception. 

But this time the sheriff might not be enough to keep Phoebe safe, after all... 

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Ratings and reviews

The plot was okay and the sex scenes as mild as you can get in this day and time. But I am a writer too and kept seeing problems. She used a lot of cliches, like "seven ways from Sunday". Writers are suppose to show rather than tell. For instant, she says that he weighs 250 lb, when she could have said something like, "his 250 lb was not fat, but muscle". She also uses a lot of passive verbs (was, were, be) rather than active verbs. Profanity would not have been needed if she did like Steve Martin in a movie where he was a fireman with a long nose.

Only one short sex scene..characters say only one curse word but often. Story was great, I was surprised close to the end about something that happens to Phoebe, her sisters & Joel's brothers had enough grit to make them believable. Will definitely look for next book in the series.

Wow! Awesome story! Page turner. Loved the Tyler women & Masterson brothers!! Phoebe & Joel went thru hell to find their love! Can't wait to read more!