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Julie Zingelman
I thought I was going to be reading a book, not a short story. (A short chapter, and that's that!) It had potential but was over before it began. The use of the word "vagina" multiple times in one paragraph kind of ruined it for me, even as a short story. I'm on Samsung galaxy s3, and it was not formatted for my screen. 1 star for these reasons...
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Sisca A Husein
Its okay of you write if its just a sample because its free. But you didnt mention that, i just find 10 pages inside to read and that dissapointing. Good story btw, i will pay to read more.
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