LoziPop C
Am i the only one annoyed with the inconsistency of the storyline? In book 2 of both blair and victoria, tori and danny were friends, and tori attacked Vlad with them, and stayed with them afterwards. Now this book starts with tori tracking their location, and an unfriendly interaction with danny. And tori speaks as if she is still working for vlad. Which she clearly isnt after the attack and other events in her own books. Im only a few pages in and its really frustrating.
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Amanda Starratt
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No consistency. I'm not even done the first chapter, and your story is off
its hinges. Your last book literally ended with Tori spending time with
with Danny and Blair at his cottage, and this book is starting off with how
she never knew before where they were, but was able to find them very
easily.
Sabrina Cramer
I loved the books story line i was just really frustrated with the dialogue. I like a book thats more realistic when they talk . and the book even confused me sometimes about who was talking. Plus if you hate someone so much you don't respond nonchalantly like you're talking to a friend. The way that Blair talked to her dad towards the end was really ruining it
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