Kimberly Miglino
I struggled to make it to page 18. I really wanted to read the story but the writing is atrocious. The sentences are choppy and I'd be surprised if an editor reviewed this book before publication. I spent so long mentally correcting all the errors that I couldn't get into the story. It seems like this book is right up my alley though, so if someone took the time to edit it properly, I would me more than willing to give it another try.
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Kelly Benedetti
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Great story line, but PLEASE have someone proofread. There were so many grammatical errors, punctuation problems, and typos it distracted from a good read.
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Monica A. McKensey
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Very poorly written. Spell/grammar check would have been a great choice. It's evident that this book was not reviewed by an editor. Had it been, this would never have made it to print.
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